First Standup

First Standup from Blaine Wheeler on Vimeo.


(Criteria based from the Speech Personality) Personality Critique Form
Grading scale of 1 to 10
(All grades start at 100 points)

Talent: Blaine Wheeler

Due Date: Feb. 15

Pitch/inflection : 9

Volume: 8

Tempo: 8 —a small studded at :10-:12 and a few pauses that were milliseconds too long

Vitality (energy): 7 — This story could have had more feel, I had a small amount of nervousness that held back some emotion. I really feel like I can bring more

Story tone (matching script w/emotion): 10 

• Pronunciation: 7at :10-:12 “to give the users more knowledge” was miss

Articulation: 8 — was clear and comprehendible

Body language (eye contact, posture, stiffness, head position etc.): 7— swayed throughout the video and blinked too much

Unprofessionalism (food in edit bay,Bad conduct, dress, unprepared, etc…): 10

Promptness (being on time): 10




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